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  • The horse-related college essay: yes or no?

    Its about that time to finally apply for college! And what comes with that? The dreaded essay. I have been toying with the idea for a while now of what I wanted to do for my essay. I went through all the cliched topics such as my heritage and diversity. (not that these are bad ideas, just would like to do something that I WANT to talk about for 500+ words) Did anyone do riding and what it taught you for your essay?

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    I can't honestly remember what it was for, but I did write one of my essays on horses. Might have been for scholarships, might have been on the actual application, I don't remember. I couldn't think of anything to write about and my college/career counselor was like "talk about horses" because I've trained my own and a few others and he's said "it shows you're responsible and patient and hard working." I can't remember the entire conversation but depending on what you're applying for (like what the question is asking) then it shouldn't hurt necessarily. I'm sure other people write about sports that they participate in so this is no different.

    And also, I did get accepted into all the schools I applied to/received all the scholarships I applied for, so I don't think writing an equine essay messesd anything up.

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    • #3
      I would stay away from an all riding one, its a little too easy to talk only about horses and drift away from the topic which should really be yourself. I did mine on a person who inspired me (I had a few choices of essay topics), which of course was a horsey person (lis hartel if you want to ever look her up, she was a very awesome woman).
      I felt it was a good combination or horse and not horse. it let the college see who I really was as a person without horses, but I still got to weave them in there. I got into every college I applied to with good scholarships so it worked. Good luck!

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      • #4
        I volunteered at a therapeutic riding center and that made for GREAT college essays... positive experiences, diversity, it could touch on everything. I also tied it in to my riding, saying how the kids inspired me, how it made me certain that I want to have horses in my life, the life lessons I learned, and so on. It was something I had a passion that also was a good learning experience so it was easy to write and also looked good for admissions. Even if your riding doesn't involve community service you can always write about how it taught you discipline, patience, determination, etc. Writing about something you love is always easier than a cliche topic that you have no real connection to. And I got in to all the schools I applied to so something worked! I'm a freshman at university now and the college application process was definitely stressful. Keep an eye on your deadlines and requirements and you'll be fine! Good luck!
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        • #5
          If horses are something you're passionate about (which I'm sure you are...or why would you be on this board? lol) then it will make for a GREAT essay. The easiest way to write something that someone will be genuinely interested in is to convey your passion in your writing.
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          • #6
            I agree with the above. Write about something you are passionate about.

            My mother read applications for a VERY good east coast school. The worst essays were usually those written trying to make the writer sound [insert positive quality here]. Believe me, it is SO easy to tell when people are writing what they think the college wants to hear, and readers don't.like.it. (They can also tell what extracurriculars were taken to pad your application--and would much rather have quality than quantity). The best essays were totally off-the-wall odd topics on something the person was PASSIONATE about. They were NOT always the best-written, but they demonstrated the writer had ideas, thoughts, feeling, etc and gave a much better idea of what kind of person they were than the typical "what I learned going on a mission trip to a 3rd world country and god I'm so fortunate [humble] and so glad I could help those people [I'm such a giving person that cares for others]" essays.

            Write about something you love. Don't go out of your way to impress the school. You'll have a much more interesting, memorable essay if you do.

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            • #7
              One of the topics on ApplyTexas was "write about an issue of importance to you" and I wrote about children wearing helmets while on a horse. I didn't get accepted to that school but I think it had to do with the fact I was not in the top 10% of my high school, not what I wrote about. Write about horses! I don't see why not, as long as it fits the prompt.

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              • #8
                You could use your experiences with horses and riding to set up analogies for how you intend to apply what you've learned to your time in college and your eventual career.

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                • #9
                  What school/major?

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                    #10
                    Not majoring in equine studies or anything horse related. However, might consider the school team for part of my horsey fix. No one school in particular, but most schools are in the competitive without being crazy range (30-50% acceptance rates)

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                    • #11
                      I wrote an essay about horses. However, mine was not just about riding. It reflected on how I used to live in a magical world where my Breyer horses came to life and then as I got older those turned into real horses, and those real horses came with real problems. It talked about how horses have always been there for me, even as they changed form - from magic to real.

                      It was a good essay, and I was complimented on it numerous times by several prestigious universities.

                      So, a good essay, with a different spin on what horses mean to you can be done

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by costco_muffins View Post
                        I wrote an essay about horses. However, mine was not just about riding. It reflected on how I used to live in a magical world where my Breyer horses came to life and then as I got older those turned into real horses, and those real horses came with real problems. It talked about how horses have always been there for me, even as they changed form - from magic to real.

                        It was a good essay, and I was complimented on it numerous times by several prestigious universities.

                        So, a good essay, with a different spin on what horses mean to you can be done
                        Mine was kind of similar to that, but I focused on the first time I ever rode, and the impact that had on my life and how it made me the person I am. I got into most of the colleges I applied to (I got wait listed at my "reach" school and rejected from my "easy" school....what a crapshoot!), and into my top choice.

                        When I wrote my essay for Edinburgh (uni I transferred to) it was not horse related but along the same lines - I chose a "moment" (this time it was eating a sandwich on the border between Scotland and England, half in one country and half in the other) and expanded on that and the impact living in two countries (UK and US) has had on my life. Again, I got in so it cant have been that bad, but I know British unis put less emphasis on essays than American ones.

                        I think my "theme" of choosing moments and analyzing/expanding them works well, as long as you can find one and apply it to the question. Though the questions are generally open ended, you cannot ignore them completely.

                        Write about what you are passionate about, but don't let that get in the way of answering the question.
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                        • #13
                          My admission essay into college was about the journey of looking for/buying my first horse and then retraining him. Showed hard work, determination, etc. I did in fact get into that school (private liberal arts, biology major) and to this day give my horse credit for getting me into college
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                          • #14
                            It's been a long time since I applied to college (I started in 1999). I was VERY active in the 4H horse program in high school (horse bowl, horse judging, leadership at the county level, volunteering teaching the younger kids), and I do think I wrote at least one essay about what the whole experience meant to me for some scholarships. I got quite a few scholarships, so it can't have hurt me . Remember that most of the people reading your essay won't know the rear end of the horse from the front end. So spin it so that it shows things like dedication, hard work, dealing with set backs etc.

                            For both my grad school interviews and my interviews for my post-grad training (yeah, i'm something of a professional student), I was asked about my riding, which I listed as an extracurricular on my applications. Lots of interviewers commented positively on me sticking with something I'm passionate about through all these years. In general, I think interviewers like it if you have SOMETHING that shows passion, not just checking off the volunteering / leadership / well-rounded boxes.

                            FWIW, at my graduate thesis defense party, my advisor said as part of his toast that when he saw me get bucked off, breaking a bone in the process (it was HIS horse!), stand up and say that I was getting back on to finish the ride, he knew I had what it took to get through a PhD.

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                            • #15
                              Lordy yes, working with the large beasties teaches us so much. You can do oodles with that.

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                              • #16
                                I wrote about a bad experience at a show (I guess it was kind of the typical "sports event gone wrong" essay, but with a horsey twist). I wrote it mostly about how beng a rider has humbled me and taught me that despite my own preparedness, sometimes there are circumstances beyond your own control and you've just got to shrug it off and move on.

                                I didn't apply to any super fancy schools, but I got into some relatively selective state schools. Of course, I don't know how much was the essay and how much was my grades/etc.

                                Basically, don't AVOID horses in your essay, but make sure you're talking more about yourself than about the horses!

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                                • #17
                                  The topic you choose is not (typically) what makes or breaks your essay. You don't need to avoid talking about horses, but you do need to avoid trying to force the essay topic to fit your chosen theme at the expense of giving an appropriate response to the question. Make your essay well-written and polished, and write about something that communicates what you want it to communicate about you but also fits the essay question well.
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                                  • #18
                                    My first horse got me into MIT.

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                                    • #19
                                      Way back - I wrote my essay about horses.
                                      I wrote a research essay on the bloodlines of the Arabian horse.
                                      Got me into a very good university.

                                      I chose that subject for 2 reasons :

                                      1. to Show I was capable of putting together an exceptional research project - and communicate the subject well to a layman.
                                      2. because I was horse crazy
                                      Originally posted by ExJumper
                                      Sometimes I'm thrown off, sometimes I'm bucked off, sometimes I simply fall off, and sometimes I go down with the ship. All of these are valid ways to part company with your horse.

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                                        Thanks for the input!

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